2,2,3,1,1,2,2,3,16

The artist has a unique voice and doesn't shy away from a complex project. The attempted effect is well worth pursuing, but the piece in its current state is not entirely successful. The top component overpowers the piece and its style does not suit the softness of the focal bead. You need something that frames the focal bead so that the eyes are drawn to it

3,3,3,2,3,2,3,3: 23

2,3,2,3,3,3,3,3: 22

4,3,3,3,3,3,2,3:24